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HOMEWORK:
What is the best physical appearance that you have? Share your answer in a few sentences.

I think myself my best appearance is a good smile that give off brilliant and positive vibe to the people around me. I don't know well, but my friends compliment me that my dimples are cute. I appreciate them.

Have a wonderful weekend too, Donna!!

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Good evening, Hae Ju!

I think that your friends are absolutely right. Your smile is very charming and one can feel warmth when they see your face. So always smile because it is the best make up on our face.

Your sentences were very well-made and put altogether to form one good short paragraph. The grammar suggestions were underlined for you to easily locate them. Congratulations to a very good answer!

See you next week, enjoy your weekend!

-T. Donna~

I think myself my best appearance is a good smile that give off brilliant and positive vibe to the people around me. 
>> I think myself my best appearance is a good smile that gives off a brilliant and a positive vibe to the people around me. 

I don't know well, but my friends compliment me that my dimples are cute. I appreciate them.
>> Correct!

Have a wonderful weekend too, Donna!!
>> Correct!
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