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Describe to me your dream house.( Where is it located)

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My dream house is tiny house. Because if I trace from my parents, I don't need to live in big house. It is located near by forest. My dream house is made with wood, and they're have a mood light in the house. And I want the house inside feeling is cozy.

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My dream house is tiny house. 
>>> My dream house is a tiny house. 
Because if I trace from my parents, I don't need to live in big house. 
>>> Because if I trace from my parents, I don't need to live in a big house. 
It is located nearby forest. 
>> It is located nearby the forest. 
My dream house is made with wood, and they're have a mood light in the house. 
>>> My dream house would be made of wood, and it will have a mood light in the house. 
And I want the house inside feeling is cozy.
>>> I want a cozy feeling inside the house.
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