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How do you feel when someone shares something with you about their personal problem? What will you do?

I try to listen well their problem and I will console them.

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Hi, Chris!
I think I will do the same thing. People need to have someone to be with them and listen to their problems in life. Your answer is short, but it was great. Thank you! ^_^
~Teacher Erin

I try to listen well their problem, and I will console them.
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