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What are the pros and cons of eating out?

작성자: 박*태
2022-08-12 709

회원님의 영작문

Dear teacher QUENNY.
Wow. You have spent a week as my english teacher Quenny. I have some passion learning english and I want to more step up in my english skill. In these reasons, your class is so special to me, I wait your call before 15 minutes . At those times I listen some english sentence and read it with the aim of memorizing some words and expression. anyway please aware of being my endeavor I tried but I know, My english level is low. ^-^
Okay get back to the topic,
As I said before, eating out is expensive than home cooking, so to speak, funny things, We need to have more money.^^
I think that is only cons of eating out.
The other side of things I can feel that was a good things I mean pros.
When my family go outside of some delicious place, we always satisfied with the moment at that time. yet. We need more money
Personally, I believe that the certain balance between eating out and cooking need to be balance at all times
OK. then. I finish my homework, ^-^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Justin, 

Eating out ensures you always have an extensive range of foods to choose from. Not only does this help solve your food boredom, but it also helps you delve into a lot of cultures through food. Cafes and restaurants help to eat more or less balanced food without much effort while saving time. The families cook simple food at home, while in the restaurant, everyone can enjoy an exotic dish or an interesting combination of products. The opportunity to meet and chat with friends in a pleasant environment is also an advantage. And eating out also has its drawbacks, the most important and obvious of which is the price of restaurant dishes, which will cost several times more than homemade food. The amount of food received will be smaller as well. "Enjoy Eating with your family" . Teacher QUENNY..



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Dear teacher QUENNY.
>> Dear Teacher QUENNY.
Wow. You have spent a week as my english teacher Quenny.
>> Wow. You have spent a week as my English teacher Quenny.
 I have some passion learning english and I want to more step up in my english skill. 
>>  I have some passion learning English and I want to more step up in my English skill to improve more my knowledge about it. 
In these reasons, your class is so special to me, I wait your call before 15 minutes . 
>> For these reasons, your class is so special to me, I wait for your call 15 minutes before my class time. 
At those times I listen some english sentence and read it with the aim of memorizing some words and expression. anyway please aware of being my endeavor I tried but I know, My english level is low. ^-^
>> At those times I listen to some English sentences and read them with the aim of memorizing some words and expressions. Anyway please be aware of my endeavor I tried but I know, My English level is low. ^-^
Okay get back to the topic,
>> Okay get back to the topic. 
As I said before, eating out is expensive than home cooking, so to speak, funny things, We need to have more money.^^
>> As I said before, eating out is more expensive than cooking at home, so to speak about funny things we need to have more money when we want to eat out. ^^
I think that is only cons of eating out.
>> I think that is the only drawback of eating out.
The other side of things I can feel that was a good things I mean pros.
>> On the other side of things, I can say that the pros are the good things or advantages. 
When my family go outside of some delicious place, we always satisfied with the moment at that time. yet. We need more money
>>When my family goes outside to eat and finds delicious food in a good place, we always make the most of it and satisfy ourselves at that moment. Yet, we need more money.
Personally, I believe that the certain balance between eating out and cooking need to be balance at all times
>>Personally, I believe that the certain balance between eating out and cooking at home needs to be balanced at all times. 
OK. then. I finish my homework, ^-^
>> OK. then. I finish my homework, ^-^
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Dear teacher QUENNY.
Wow. You have spent a week as my english teacher Quenny. I have some passion learning english and I want to more step up in my english skill. In these reasons, your class is so special to me, I wait your call before 15 minutes . At those times I listen some english sentence and read it with the aim of memorizing some words and expression. anyway please aware of being my endeavor I tried but I know, My english level is low. ^-^
Okay get back to the topic,
As I said before, eating out is expensive than home cooking, so to speak, funny things, We need to have more money.^^
I think that is only cons of eating out.
The other side of things I can feel that was a good things I mean pros.
When my family go outside of some delicious place, we always satisfied with the moment at that time. yet. We need more money
Personally, I believe that the certain balance between eating out and cooking need to be balance at all times
OK. then. I finish my homework, ^-^
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