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Happy Friday, Donna.
These days, as you know, I was stressed and exhausted, so I crave a wiskey everyday.
However, fortunately, there is no more wiskey in my house, thus I couldn\'t drink.
Can you guess what happened?
Today, someone visited me with the present of some port wine.
What a surprise!
So, I drank that port wine just before, and I am so satisfied with that.
This morning, I told our clinic manager what her problems are.
Unexpectedly, she seemed to agree with me, and told me that she will try to fix it.
Today\'s homework is about gadget.
When I was a child, I saw the animation named "Detective Gadget"
As you can know, the main character's name is Gadget.
He is a cyborg. He has an intelligence, but, his body is consist of metals.
About my homework, I can say that my best gadget is a cellphone.
We can talk to each other with it, even if we aren't in the same place.
In addition, my phone wake me up everyday.
There are a lot of usage about the phone.
Have a burst weekend.
See you.

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Good evening, Dr. Kim!

What good luck knocked on your door today! Your prayers have been heard. Cheers to all of your hard work and dedication to your profession this week. I always keep a bottle of white and red wine too for 'emergency' cases. Meanwhile, addressing your issues with the clinic manager was the best thing to do since members cannot just keep leaving, and your authority should never be bypassed. Then, expect good changes and adjustments in your office next week.

Well, gadgets were big robots that operate by themselves. This is what we always imagine when we were young. Who would have thought that today, gadgets come in the smallest compacted device and still control human beings lives. That is amazing! Although I haven't seen Gadget, I watched Transformers before and I think that robots are truly gigantic gadgets that can overtake us.

Watch out for simple spellings as well as the accurate use of punctuation marks all the time. Kindly go over them below. Your answer had excellent expressions, style, and execution. Outstanding!

Keep safe.

-T. Donna~

Happy Friday, Donna.
>> Correct!

These days, as you know, I was stressed and exhausted, so I crave a wiskey everyday.
>> These days, as you know, I was stressed and exhausted, so I craved for some whiskey everyday.

However, fortunately, there is no more wiskey in my house, thus I couldn\'t drink.
>> Correct!
Or: whiskey, couldn't

Can you guess what happened?
>> Correct!

Today, someone visited me with the present of some port wine.
>> Correct!

What a surprise!
>> Correct!

So, I drank that port wine just before, and I am so satisfied with that.
>> Correct!

This morning, I told our clinic manager what her problems are.
>> Correct!

Unexpectedly, she seemed to agree with me, and told me that she will try to fix it.
>> Correct!

Today\'s homework is about gadget.
>> Correct!

When I was a child, I saw the animation named "Detective Gadget"
>> Correct! Place a period after the sentence.

As you can know, the main character's name is Gadget.
>> Correct!

He is a cyborg. He has an intelligence, but, his body is consist of metals.
>> He is a cyborg. He has an intelligence, but, his body consists of metals.

About my homework, I can say that my best gadget is a cellphone.
>> Correct!

We can talk to each other with it, even if we aren't in the same place.
>> Correct! 
Or: Remove the comma.

In addition, my phone wake me up everyday.
>> In addition, my phone wakes me up everyday.

There are a lot of usage about the phone.
>> There are a lot of usages of the phone.

Have a burst weekend.
>> Have a blast this weekend.

See you.
>> Correct!
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