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What if you could spend your life never sleeping? What would you do with the extra hours in each day

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If I had extra time for any reason including no-need sleep, I would learn more about real estate investment, the Bible and improve my English skill. Those are the things that I study everyday. As a busy salary man, I don't have enough time to do them that I always feel the need for more time. For the better or for the worse, I need to take some rest and I have to spare my time to improve myself. I just do my best in my given situation.

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Happy Friday! ^_^) 

Steve, thank you for finding time to answer your homework.

According to Einstein's comment, both the past and the future are immutable and will unfold exactly as they were intended to. He also thought that time is an illusion.

Making the most of your time will enable you to accomplish more with less time.

If you have queries, let's talk about them later. See you!

__T. Mayleen :)


If I had extra time for any reason including no-need sleep, I would learn more about real estate investment, the Bible and improve my English skill. Those are the things that I study everyday.
>>> If I had extra time for any reason, including no-need sleep, I would learn more about real estate investment, the Bible, and improve my English skills. Those are the things that I study every day.

As a busy salary man, I don't have enough time to do them that I always feel the need for more time.
>>> As a busy salary man, I don't have enough time to do the things that I always feel the need for more time to do.
>>> OR: I don't have enough time to do the things that I constantly feel like I need more time for since I'm a busy salary guy.

For the better or for the worse, I need to take some rest and I have to spare my time to improve myself.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I have to take a break and make time to work on myself, whether for the better or for the worst.

I just do my best in my given situation.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I simply try my best given the circumstances.
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