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Do you work better alone or with a team? Answer in a few sentences.

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I prefer to work as a group because it disperses responsibility, so I can have a less pressure about the mark than doing it individually.

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Hi there, Judy!

Working in a group gives us the chance to learn from others too. So, give and take and vice versa. The most important thing is to do your task whether you are the leader or the member. 

Thank you for doing this homework task in creating this one sentence, one answer composition. Great job!

See you!

-T. Donna~

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