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What do you shop for and who do you shop with?

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i love shopping, but im not enjoy shopping at mall. you know it's because mall is so noisey. there are so many products and people right?. it's sometime makes me tired. so i enjoy to shop at internet. anyway i usally shop for clothes i love to buy some outer clothes and when i have to go mall? i normally shop with my mom. i love to shop with my mom. because she has nice fashion sense and also she always but clothes for me.

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Hello Robin!
Follow the subject-verb agreement when you are using the present tense for singular subjects.  Make more sentences so you will be familiar with it.  You are almost on the perfect track so keep on going. ^^



~T.  Maine


i love shopping, but im not enjoy shopping at mall.
>>I love shopping, but I'm not enjoying shopping at the mall. 
 you know it's because mall is so noisey. 
>> You know it's because the mall is so noisy. 

there are so many products and people right?. 
>> There are so many products and people. 

it's sometime makes me tired. 
>> It sometimes makes me tired. 

so i enjoy to shop at internet. 
>>So I enjoy shopping on the internet. 
>>OR:  I enjoy shopping online. 

anyway i usally shop for clothes i love to buy some outer clothes and when i have to go mall?
>>Anyway, I usually shop for clothes I love to buy such as some outer clothes, and when I have to go to the mall to get what I need. 

 i normally shop with my mom. 
>>  I normally shop with my mom. 

i love to shop with my mom. because she has nice fashion sense and also she always but clothes for me.
>> I love to shop with my mom because she has a nice fashion sense and she also always buys clothes for me. 

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