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Q. Scientists believe that in order to protect the environment, people must use less energy in their daily lives. However, most people have not changed the way they live. Why do you think many people have not taken individual action? What could be done to encourage them to take action?


A.People don¡¯t use less energy.Because if people use less energy then they can feel uncomfortable.We can advertise about envioroment to encourage them to take action.

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A.People don¡¯t use less energy.Because if people use less energy then they can feel uncomfortable.
>>> People don¡¯t use less energy because if they do, they can feel uncomfortable.
We can advertise about environment to encourage them to take action.
>>> We can promote environmental advocacies to encourage them to take actions.
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