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Why is helping others important?

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no one can do everything alone.
so helping other is important.
also it is great to help other people.
but it is not easy to helping someone.
now a days people is very busy. so their haven't enough time.

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Hi JT! 

Thank you for sharing your answer and thought in regards to my question. 
I sincerely appreciate it. Indeed, helping others is really important as there are things which we can never do alone. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina

no one can do everything alone.
so helping other is important.
also it is great to help other people.
but it is not easy to helping someone.
now a days people is very busy. so their haven't enough time.

>> No one can do everything alone.
So helping others is important.
Also, it is great to help other people.
But it is not easy to help someone.
Nowadays people are very busy so they don't have enough time.
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