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What body language do you use when you speak in English? Share your answer in a few sentences.

When I speak in English, I often use my hands and face. As I use my hands and faces, I deliver better to say someone. These two things can accurately convey what I am trying to express.

I'm happy to be with you in coming classes. Good evening, Donna!

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Good evening, Hae Ju!

My heartfelt gratitude for your re-enrolment today! Thank you very much. It's always a great pleasure teaching and guiding you in your English journey. Let's have meaningful and fun times in class together.

Here on your homework, your statements are very strong when you use simple yet correct expressions and correct grammar patterns. Congratulations for doing a great job below! Read my tiny suggestions to make your sentences even better. Excellent answer!

Good night and see you again soon!

-T. Donna~

When I speak in English, I often use my hands and face. 
>> Correct!

As I use my hands and faces, I deliver better to say someone. 
>> As I use my hands and face, I deliver better what to say to someone. 

These two things can accurately convey what I am trying to express. 
>> Correct!

I'm happy to be with you in coming classes. 
>> Correct!

Good evening, Donna!
>> Correct!

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