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Thank you for your concern.
It's been a heavy rain in 115 years.
There are many places flooding.

What kind of public transport do you wish your country would have?

Fortunately, we are public transport very good system.

There are so many people ride bicycles these days.
I want Korea will make ride bicycles road more than now.
SoI hope there is a transportation for the disabled.

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Hi, Soolyn!  Cycling is more environmentally friendly, so I hope more people are encouraged to do it. See you later! Keep safe! -Faith-
Thank you for your concern.
>> CORRECT
It's been a heavy rain in 115 years.
>> This year has the heaviest rainfall in 115 years.
There are many places flooding.

>> CORRECT
OR Many areas in Seoul are flooded.
What kind of public transport do you wish your country would have?
>> CORRECT
Fortunately, we are public transport very good system.
>> Fortunately, our public transport system is very good.
There are so many people ride bicycles these days.
>> There are so many people riding the bicycles these days.
I want Korea will make ride bicycles road more than now.
>> I want Korea to give more bicycle lanes than now.
SoI hope there is a transportation for the disabled.
>> I hope there is a transportation for the disabled.
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