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First, I love my place that it's near Han river so that I can walk around there.
>> First, I love my place, it's near the Han river and I can walk around there.
Also, when it's a sunny, I can have a chicken with beer.
>> Also, when it's sunny, I can have chicken and beer.
Second, there are a lot of fun and entertainment.
>> Secondly, there are a lot of fun activities for entertainment.
And last one, wherever you visit and there are no dangerous places in South Korea.
>> Lastly, there are no dangerous places in South Korea.
If you lose something in Korea, you can find it quickly.
>> Correct. OR If you lose something in Korea, you can easily find it.
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