¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Are you happy with a two-day weekend or should it be three days?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¼­*ȯ
2022-08-08 720

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

oh that's weird question isn't it? everyone think three days weekends will be more happy. i mean everyone like weekends than weekdays right? oh it will be so cool if we get 3days for rest in one week. and i think the best reason why i back up 3days weekends is we can go travel!. in fact if we go travel with family or friend in saturday we can't spend two night and we have to prepare to go work. but when we have 3days weekend. we can prepare one more day after travel. its so cool isn't it

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello Robin!
Try to apply the patterns in grammar such as the use of s-form of verbs in subject-verb agreement and the use of comparative adjectives as well.  ^^

~T. Maine


oh that's weird question isn't it? 
>> Oh, that's a weird question, isn't it?
everyone think three days weekends will be more happy. 
>>Everyone thinks a three-day weekend will be happier. 
i mean everyone like weekends than weekdays right? 
>>I mean everyone likes weekends more than weekdays, right?
oh it will be so cool if we get 3days for rest in one week. 
>> Oh, it will be so cool if we get three days to take some rest in one week. 
and i think the best reason why i back up 3days weekends is we can go travel!. 
>> And I think the best reason is we can go traveling in three days. 
in fact if we go travel with family or friend in saturday we can't spend two night and we have to prepare to go work. 
>> In fact, if we go traveling with our families or friends on Saturday, we can't spend two nights and we have to prepare to go to work. 
but when we have 3days weekend.  we can prepare one more day after travel. 
>> But when we have 3 days, we can prepare one more day after traveling. 
its so cool isn't it
>> It's so cool, isn't it?
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
119632 What career do you want 10 years from now? Answer in a few... ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 187
119631 About next travel ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 0
119630 Two day\'s answer. ÇÑ*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 248
119629 What is honesty? Are you always truthful? ¹é*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 192
119628 Proposal ¿°*¿¹ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 4
119627 What are the things we could do to protect ourselves from crime? ±è*Áö ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 155
119626 What makes me angry. ±è*¼º ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 213
119625 What is the strangest holiday or festival you have heard of? ±è*Áö ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 661
119624 What other languages do you want to learn? Why? ½Å*ÈÄ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 1
119623 homework ¿ø*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 160
119622 homework ÀÌ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 157
119621 Do you think that you should change your eating habits? Why or... ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 0
119620 In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of... ±è*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 0
119619 Homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 2
119618 The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe... ±è*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 0
119617 Homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 2
119616 homework ÀÌ*¾Ö ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 5
119615 Betray ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 1
119614 the war ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 129
119613 Do you feel comfortable when you stay at a hotel? ¹Ú*Çö ¿Ï·á 2022-06-06 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04