¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Are you happy with a two-day weekend or should it be three days?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¼­*ȯ
2022-08-08 649

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

oh that's weird question isn't it? everyone think three days weekends will be more happy. i mean everyone like weekends than weekdays right? oh it will be so cool if we get 3days for rest in one week. and i think the best reason why i back up 3days weekends is we can go travel!. in fact if we go travel with family or friend in saturday we can't spend two night and we have to prepare to go work. but when we have 3days weekend. we can prepare one more day after travel. its so cool isn't it

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello Robin!
Try to apply the patterns in grammar such as the use of s-form of verbs in subject-verb agreement and the use of comparative adjectives as well.  ^^

~T. Maine


oh that's weird question isn't it? 
>> Oh, that's a weird question, isn't it?
everyone think three days weekends will be more happy. 
>>Everyone thinks a three-day weekend will be happier. 
i mean everyone like weekends than weekdays right? 
>>I mean everyone likes weekends more than weekdays, right?
oh it will be so cool if we get 3days for rest in one week. 
>> Oh, it will be so cool if we get three days to take some rest in one week. 
and i think the best reason why i back up 3days weekends is we can go travel!. 
>> And I think the best reason is we can go traveling in three days. 
in fact if we go travel with family or friend in saturday we can't spend two night and we have to prepare to go work. 
>> In fact, if we go traveling with our families or friends on Saturday, we can't spend two nights and we have to prepare to go to work. 
but when we have 3days weekend.  we can prepare one more day after travel. 
>> But when we have 3 days, we can prepare one more day after traveling. 
its so cool isn't it
>> It's so cool, isn't it?
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
120328 Tell me something that not a lot of people know about you. ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 587
120327 family dinner ¼­*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 329
120326 What government policy do you find very helpful for you? Answer... ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 407
120325 Can the government do anything to improve people¡¯s health? Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 765
120324 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 0
120323 How do you feel when someone disagrees with everything you have... ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 0
120322 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 875
120321 What are the most effective ways to make new friends? ÀÌ*¸í ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 1
120320 Abroad ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 2
120319 1. homework Á¶*¸§ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 2
120318 Should your country accept refugees? Why or why not? ¹é*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 500
120317 self introduction ¼Õ*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 3
120316 Books Have The Power to Change The World ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 441
120315 Q È«*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 3
120314 Do you think it\'s okay to drink rainwater? ¹Ú*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 388
120313 homework À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 719
120312 homework À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 851
120311 dinner with my family ¼­*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 407
120310 What do people in your country collect? Àü*ä ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 517
120309 How do you feel about your parents growing older? ±è*ºó ¿Ï·á 2022-06-30 563

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04