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Please tell me something about your typical weekend.

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oh i love weekend because you know we can sleep more day in weekdays. well my... typical weekend starts at 11am.when i wake up, i always drink cold water first. because it makes me feel more fresh. and then greet to my parents and eat some sandwiches. you know usually in weekdays my mom makes breakfirst for me, but in weekend i dont wanna bother her. so i make it myself.
umm let me see. after eat breakfirst i wash my face and clean the bathroom. i clean my bathroom every weekend. always. it is quit tough job but after cleaning? i feel so good. after that ...it is changed all the time, but sometime i go cafe and do some english study or meet some friends

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Hello Robin!
Thanks a lot for accomplishing this homework.  Learn from your mistakes and improve your answers. ^^

~T. Maine


oh i love weekend because you know we can sleep more day in weekdays. 
>>Oh, I love the weekends because you know we can sleep more on these days. 
well my... typical weekend starts at 11am.
>> Well, my typical weekend starts at 11 am. 
when i wake up, i always drink cold water first.
>>When I wake up, I always drink cold water first. 
 because it makes me feel more fresh. 
>> It is because it makes me feel more fresh. 
and then greet to my parents and eat some sandwiches. 
>>And then I greet my parents and eat some sandwiches. 
you know usually in weekdays my mom makes breakfirst for me, but in weekend i dont wanna bother her. so i make it myself.
>> You know, usually on weekdays, my mom makes breakfast for me.  But on weekends, I don't want to bother her so I make it myself. 
umm let me see. after eat breakfirst i wash my face and clean the bathroom. 
>>After breakfast, I wash my face and clean the bathroom. 
i clean my bathroom every weekend. 
>> I clean my bathroom every weekend. 
always. it is quit tough job but after cleaning?
>> I always do it.  It is quite a tough job.  
 i feel so good. 
>> But after that, I feel good. 
after that ...it is changed all the time, but sometime i go cafe and do some english study or meet some friends
>> The feeling changes all the time.  But sometimes I go to a cafe and study English, or I meet some of my friends. 

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