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My worse travel experience was when visit temple in the Bali.
Because the weather was so hot,and my father doesn't liked it and me too. Just my mother liked it. This travel is for healing but it just like visit very old historical site.

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Hi Daisy!
It's good to experience another country's culture right? I guess your mom liked Bali because of its beautiful beach. 
Thank you for doing your homework,
Have a great day :)
T. Aki~
My worse travel experience was when visit temple in the Bali.
>>> My worse travel experience was when I visit a temple in the Bali.
Because the weather was so hot,and my father doesn't liked it and me too. Just my mother liked it. 
>>> Because the weather was so hot, Only my mom liked it but my  ather and I didn't like it
This travel is for healing but it just like visit very old historical site.
>>>  This travel is supposedly for healing but it's just like a iin a very old historical site.
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