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Hello, Donna.
Lately, I feel that my time is flying.
There will be many changes in my life.
I think it's exciting, but also it's scared.
Maybe you know that I am very stressful.
Anyway, I should get over this situation.
About today's homework, I have no idea what you said exactly.
"To face a stressful situation or to face it?"
Or, to face it or to avoid it?
I think that most people who have a goal must be stressful.
This is because those people couldn't be satisfied to current situation.
To succeed, they have to try harder, and that is not easy.
There are many obstacles and bad situations.
Thus, if we meet a big problem, we can choose to face or avoid it.
At that time, I usually try to face it directly, and overcome it.
I know we(especially you) are enthusiastic and diligent nontheless, we can't avoid some bad situations.
So, we get the stress everyday, and we need some good ways to relieve it.
I hope we can stay away from the stress forever.
Have a good weekend.

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Happy new week, Dr. Kim!

First of all, apologies for the omission of the word 'not' in the homework question. Nonetheless, I am glad that you were able to figure out the aim of the task. So, thank you so much for answering with great substance as well as  possessing direct and combinations of simple and complex sentences.

Stress will always be a part of our lives. At times, we cannot control the situation so we have to be in full control on how we respond to things around us. We have to understand that not all of the people around us work at the same speed and quality as ours and vice versa. Therefore, being brave and prayerful can overcome adversities brought about by stress.

I wish you a stress-free week! This must be near impossible but we ought to hope for the least stress and keep chasing our dreams. Have a healthy lunch!

See you!

-T. Donna~

Hello, Donna.
>> Correct!

Lately, I feel that my time is flying.
>> Correct!

There will be many changes in my life.
>> Correct!

I think it's exciting, but also it's scared.
>> I think it's exciting, but also it's scary. / I think it's exciting, but I also feel scared. 

Maybe you know that I am very stressful.
>> Maybe you know that I am very stressed.

Anyway, I should get over this situation.
>> Correct!

About today's homework, I have no idea what you said exactly.
>> Correct!

"To face a stressful situation or to face it?"
>> "To face a stressful situation or not to face it?"

Or, to face it or to avoid it?
>> Correct!

I think that most people who have a goal must be stressful.
>> I think that most people who have a goal must be stressed.

This is because those people couldn't be satisfied to current situation.
>> Correct!

To succeed, they have to try harder, and that is not easy.
>> Correct!

There are many obstacles and bad situations.
>> Correct!

Thus, if we meet a big problem, we can choose to face or avoid it.
>> Correct!

At that time, I usually try to face it directly, and overcome it.
>> Correct!

I know we(especially you) are enthusiastic and diligent nontheless, we can't avoid some bad situations.
>> Correct!

So, we get the stress everyday, and we need some good ways to relieve it.
>> So, we get stress everyday, and we need some good ways to relieve it.

I hope we can stay away from the stress forever.
>> I hope we can stay away from stress forever.

Have a good weekend.
>> Correct!
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