¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¿¬
2022-08-05 538

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Where do you want to take your family on your next vacation? Explain your answer in five sentences.

I want to go to Jeju Island with my family.
I want to see the sunrise in Jeju Island.
I want to play in the sea and eat delicious food.
I'm sure it'll be a good time.
I hope to do it.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë


Hi Jessica,
Studies and relaxation both are very important for your health. Relaxing during a two-week vacation or summer vacation is important because it allows you to recharge. The summer break also helps relieve some of the pressure experienced during the academic year. Enjoy your summer vacation..:) ~ Teacher QUENNY..

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Where do you want to take your family on your next vacation? Explain your answer in five sentences.
>>Where do you want to take your family on your next vacation? Explain your answer in five sentences. (CORRECT) 
I want to go to Jeju Island with my family.
>> I want to go to Jeju Island with my family.(CORRECT) 
I want to see the sunrise in Jeju Island.
>> I want to see the sunrise on Jeju Island.
I want to play in the sea and eat delicious food.
> I want to play in the sea and eat delicious food.(CORRECT) 
I'm sure it'll be a good time.
>> I'm sure it'll be a good time.
I hope to do it.
>> I hope to do it soon. 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Where do you want to take your family on your next vacation? Explain your answer in five sentences.

I want to go to Jeju Island with my family.
I want to see the sunrise in Jeju Island.
I want to play in the sea and eat delicious food.
I'm sure it'll be a good time.
I hope to do it.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
123894 Wednesday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1329
123893 Do you think South Korea should also start developing nuclear... ±è*¹® ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1557
123892 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1
123891 How do you minimize your spending on food? Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1019
123890 Homework~~ ¹Ú*Çü ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1129
123889 Do you agree that Apple and Google should both be penalized due... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1405
123888 29.11.Nov ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 9
123887 What is the best way to make new friends? ÀÓ*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 0
123886 What was the most severe disease you ever had? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1
123885 If you could have a conversation with any famous living person,... Àü*ä ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1457
123884 If you were invited to a fancy dinner with the president, what... ±è*¼º ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 7
123883 Why are some people not interested in sports? ¾ç*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-11-29 1176
123882 How can you make your free time more productive? Answer in a few... ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-29 1281
123881 Make a story about two best friends who became the most popular... ±è*À² ¿Ï·á 2022-11-29 1251
123880 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2022-11-29 0
123879 Homework (11/24) ¿¡*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2022-11-29 1
123878 Homework (11/23) ¿¡*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2022-11-29 1
123877 homework ¹Ú*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-29 1438
123876 check on ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-29 1
123875 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-29 1423

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04