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Where do you want to take your family on your next vacation? Explain your answer in five sentences.

I want to go to Jeju Island with my family.
I want to see the sunrise in Jeju Island.
I want to play in the sea and eat delicious food.
I'm sure it'll be a good time.
I hope to do it.

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Hi Jessica,
Studies and relaxation both are very important for your health. Relaxing during a two-week vacation or summer vacation is important because it allows you to recharge. The summer break also helps relieve some of the pressure experienced during the academic year. Enjoy your summer vacation..:) ~ Teacher QUENNY..

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Where do you want to take your family on your next vacation? Explain your answer in five sentences.
>>Where do you want to take your family on your next vacation? Explain your answer in five sentences. (CORRECT) 
I want to go to Jeju Island with my family.
>> I want to go to Jeju Island with my family.(CORRECT) 
I want to see the sunrise in Jeju Island.
>> I want to see the sunrise on Jeju Island.
I want to play in the sea and eat delicious food.
> I want to play in the sea and eat delicious food.(CORRECT) 
I'm sure it'll be a good time.
>> I'm sure it'll be a good time.
I hope to do it.
>> I hope to do it soon. 
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Where do you want to take your family on your next vacation? Explain your answer in five sentences.

I want to go to Jeju Island with my family.
I want to see the sunrise in Jeju Island.
I want to play in the sea and eat delicious food.
I'm sure it'll be a good time.
I hope to do it.
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