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What kinds of things do you complain about?

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I experience a lot of wrong and fixed ideas if I meet people.
And I usually complain about these kinds of thinking.
Actually, I don't actually be hurt, but others can be hurt buy some wrong and fixed ideas.
Because of this reason, I'm trying to not mention about those kinds of thinking.
And also if I listen someone is talking about those ideas, then I complain about it.

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Hello John!
You're right stereotypes are a little bit  offensive for some people. Thanks for sharing your thought. See you next week! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

I experience a lot of wrong and fixed ideas if I meet people.
>>CORRECT!
And I usually complain about these kinds of thinking.
>>CORRECT!
Actually, I don't actually be hurt, but others can be hurt buy some wrong and fixed ideas.
>>I don't actually get hurt but other can get hurt by some stereotypes. 
Because of this reason, I'm trying to not mention about those kinds of thinking.
>>Because of this reason, I'm trying not to mention those kinds of thinking.
And also if I listen someone is talking about those ideas, then I complain about it.
>>And also if I listen to someone talking about those ideas, then I complain about it.
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