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Are there any holidays that you really don’t like?

작성자: 전*채
2022-08-05 433

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Actually, I don't like the Lunar new year day. It is because,
my family didn't take a rest in that day untill 2 years ago.
We went to the grandfather house every lunar new day and we prepare the ancestral rites. There was far of 3 hours on the car.
I made a lot of traditional food. And the house was small so that was full of whole family. It was uncomfortable when I slept.
But I liked to saw my grand parents but the were patriarchal person so they gave my parents hard time.
We couldn't take a rest in big holidays. When we came back home then a holiday was done. But when grandfather died. We stoped this rulse. I'm sorry to my grandfather and I love him but it's good things that we quit. At last, We will really rest and relex on the holidays.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Eun Chae!
I understand your situation during your holidays on New Year.  Well, that is your tradition to follow.  It is the time to bond with your relatives.  ^^  Check your spelling in writing. ^^

~T. Maine

Actually, I don't like the Lunar new year day. 
>> Actually, I don't like Lunar New Year's day. 
It is because, my family didn't take a rest in that day untill 2 years ago.
>> It is because my family didn't take some rest on that day for 2 years. 
We went to the grandfather house every lunar new day and we prepare the ancestral rites. 
>> We went to my grandfather's house every Lunar New Year's day and prepare the ancestral rites. 
There was far of 3 hours on the car.
>>It was far there and it takes 3 hours by car.
I made a lot of traditional food. 
>> Correct. 
And the house was small so that was full of whole family. 
>> And the house was small so it was full of my relatives. 
It was uncomfortable when I slept.
>> Correct. 
But I liked to saw my grand parents but the were patriarchal person so they gave my parents hard time.
>> But I like to see my grandparents.  There were patriarchal people so they gave my parents a hard time. 
We couldn't take a rest in big holidays. 
>> We couldn't take a rest on big holidays. 
When we came back home then a holiday was done. 
>> When we came back home, the holiday was done. 
But when grandfather died. We stoped this rulse.
>> But when my grandfather died we stopped this culture. 
 I'm sorry to my grandfather and I love him but it's good things that we quit. 
>> I'm sorry to my grandfather.  I love him but it's a good thing we quit doing it. 
At last, We will really rest and relex on the holidays.
>> At last, we will really have some rest and relaxation on holidays. 
^^

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