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i work as stock division manager in my company.
usually i explain about my company's financial state to investor.

when my company's stock cost was down to stock market, many people complain to me.
They was angry and they annoyed to me.

but when stock cost raised, i'm very happy.

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Hi JT! Good evening! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this topic. ^_^
T. Irene
i work as stock division manager in my company.
>>> I work as a stock division manager in my company.
usually i explain about my company's financial state to investor.
>>> I usually explain my company's financial state to an investor.
when my company's stock cost was down to stock market, many people complain to me.
>>> When my company's stock value in the market went down, many people complained to me. 
They was angry and they annoyed to me.
>>> They were angry and annoyed at me. 
but when stock cost raised, i'm very happy.
>>> But when the stock value went up, I was very happy. 



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