¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

What is the most challenging part of your job? What is the most rewarding part?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*ÅÂ
2022-08-04 835

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

i work as stock division manager in my company.
usually i explain about my company's financial state to investor.

when my company's stock cost was down to stock market, many people complain to me.
They was angry and they annoyed to me.

but when stock cost raised, i'm very happy.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi JT! Good evening! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this topic. ^_^
T. Irene
i work as stock division manager in my company.
>>> I work as a stock division manager in my company.
usually i explain about my company's financial state to investor.
>>> I usually explain my company's financial state to an investor.
when my company's stock cost was down to stock market, many people complain to me.
>>> When my company's stock value in the market went down, many people complained to me. 
They was angry and they annoyed to me.
>>> They were angry and annoyed at me. 
but when stock cost raised, i'm very happy.
>>> But when the stock value went up, I was very happy. 



¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
120910 Hi Gemmar ÀÌ*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 388
120909 Entertain ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 2
120908 What kind of exercise would you like to try in the future? ¹Ú*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 420
120907 Please help me check grammar. ¹Ú*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 295
120906 homework Á¶*¸§ ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 267
120905 What are the proven benefits of eating meat? ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 569
120904 About allowing children ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 2
120903 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 2
120902 Homework ÀÌ*¸í ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 2
120901 What genre of English books do you like to read? ¹Ú*Çö ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 0
120900 What is the worst restaurant that you have ever eaten at? Àü*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 3
120899 Do you think being slim equals beautiful? Why or why not? ¹Ú*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 473
120898 Choosing subjects Â÷*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 1
120897 What¡¯s the best way to get things done on time? ±è*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 1
120896 Homework for 07.19.2022 ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 1
120895 Describe a time of the day you like ±è*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 1
120894 What influences other people in their dreams or ambition? ¹Ú*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 369
120893 Many people today put personal information online for the needs... ±è*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 0
120892 The best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask... ±è*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2022-07-20 0
120891 What¡¯s the best way to travel? Àü*ä ¿Ï·á 2022-07-19 326

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04