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What movie is the worst for you? Why?

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2022-08-04 1253

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I can remember great movies. but i can't remember bad movies. let me think about it... umm... ok 4years ago. i saw the movie 'monster' with my girlfreind. i wanna see great movie with her. so i see every movie's trailer but there were not good movie in that season. so i just selected that movie. but it was my worst choice. the monster's graphic was not good quality and also story wass boring. so me and my girlfriend sighed after movie. and our mood was broken. so i hate that movie most

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Hi there, Robin!
I am sorry to hear about that movie you mentioned.  There are some movies which have good trailers but terrible screenplays, stories, or even graphics.   Learn from this experience and try to choose better movies next time. ^^

~T. Maine

I can remember great movies. 
>> Correct. 
but i can't remember bad movies. 
>> But I can't remember some bad movies. 
let me think about it... 
>> Let me thing about it. 
umm... ok 4years ago. i saw the movie 'monster' with my girlfreind. 
>> Here it is. Four years ago, I saw the movie entitled, "Monster" with my girlfriend. 
i wanna see great movie with her. 
>> I want to see a great movie with her. 
so i see every movie's trailer but there were not good movie in that season. 
>> So I watch every movie's trailer but there were no good movies in that season. 
so i just selected that movie. 
>> So I just selected that movie. 
but it was my worst choice. 
>> But it was the worst choice. 
the monster's graphic was not good quality and also story wass boring.
>> The movie's graphics were not good and the story was boring. 
 so me and my girlfriend sighed after movie.
>> So my girlfriend and I sighed after the movie. 
 and our mood was broken. 
>> And our mood was broken. 
so i hate that movie most
>> So I hate that movie the most. 

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