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Would you like it to be summer forever? Why/Why not? Kindly answer in 3 to 5 sentences.

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I hope you don't mind my saying, but I don't like summer at all. Summer is so humid and sticky that I sometimes feel even irritated. However, I can take a long vacation during summer season that It's true that I expect summer season. In short, summer is neither close to me nor far away from me.

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Hello, Steve!
(^___^)

I can relate to your sentiments. Summer isn't my favorite season either.
While summer brings warmer weather, longer evenings, and garden barbecues, it also brings sunburn and sweat. Roadways and beaches are more crowded, and insects like mosquitoes are on the prowl.

Thank you for this composition. I will talk to you again on Monday.
Have a good weekend!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


I hope you don't mind my saying, but I don't like summer at all.
>>> I hope you don't mind me saying this, but I don't like summer at all.
Summer is so humid and sticky that I sometimes feel even irritated.
>>> Summer is so humid and sticky that I sometimes feel irritated.
>>> OR: The summers are so sticky and muggy that I occasionally become frustrated.
However, I can take a long vacation during summer season that It's true that I expect summer season. In short, summer is neither close to me nor far away from me.
>>> However, I can take a long vacation during the summer season. It's true that I expect the summer season. In short, summer is neither close to me nor far away from me.
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