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Talk about how technology has changed in your lifetime.

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When I was young, I ran home not to be late for some popular animations on TV. So while popular sports game or movie was on TV, there were few people on the street because they went home to see them on TV. However, we can watch any movie or sports game on a smartphone anywhere anytime.

Decades ago, a newspaper greatly influenced people because almost everyone read the newspaper to keep up with the time. However, many newspaper publishing companies are converting printed newspapers to news on the web according to the changing ways people get the information they need. Therefore newspapers become never dime a dozen anymore these days.

Lastly, contemporary people are getting used to SNS communication ways such as Facebook or KaKaoTalk when they are far away from each other. On the contrary, people many years ago were talking over the phone when they were distant from each other.

This technological development goes on forever, changing human styles, thoughts, and how to live.

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Hello, Yeong Kyeong! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


When I was young, I ran home not to be late for some popular animations on TV. So while popular sports game or movie was on TV, there were few people on the street because they went home to see them on TV. 
>>> CORRECT!

However, we can watch any movie or sports game on a smartphone anywhere anytime.
>>> CORRECT!

Decades ago, a newspaper greatly influenced people because almost everyone read the newspaper to keep up with the time. 
>>> CORRECT!

However, many newspaper publishing companies are converting printed newspapers to news on the web according to the changing ways people get the information they need. 
>>> CORRECT!

Therefore newspapers become never dime a dozen anymore these days.
>>>  CORRECT!

Lastly, contemporary people are getting used to SNS communication ways such as Facebook or KaKaoTalk when they are far away from each other. 
>>>  CORRECT!

On the contrary, people many years ago were talking over the phone when they were distant from each other.
>>>  CORRECT!

This technological development goes on forever, changing human styles, thoughts, and how to live.
>>> CORRECT!
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