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Do you think writing will disappear in the future, once computers can recognize and write down every

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No, I don't think writing will disappear in the future, because writing has special mood like vintage. So, I believe that hand writing will be increased value. Also, not everyone has computers. So, I'm sure that writing will be more valuable. Especially, in the urgent situation, the value of writing will be increased. For example, in the serious situation, writing can be a key! Because of this, I hope that many people don't stop writing. Clearly, writing will be important asset!

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Good day, Kimberly!

Thank you for doing your homework! 
I see how much you like writing based on your homework^^ I love writing, too! I agree that handwriting gives an authentic feeling in writing.
I would like to learn calligraphy and write wonderful letters to my loved ones. How about you? 

We can chat about this later in class. See you! 

~ Teacher Gela

No, I don't think writing will disappear in the future, because writing has special mood like vintage. 
>> No, I don't think writing will disappear in the future because it has a special vintage mood. 
So, I believe that hand writing will be increased value.
>> So, I believe that handwriting will be increased in value.
Also, not everyone has computers. 
>> CORRECT
So, I'm sure that writing will be more valuable. 
>> CORRECT
OR>> Also, not everyone has computers, so I'm sure that writing will be more valuable.
Especially, in the urgent situation, the value of writing will be increased. 
>> Especially, in an urgent situation, the value of writing will be increased.
For example, in the serious situation, writing can be a key! 
>> For example, in a serious situation, writing can be a key!
Because of this, I hope that many people don't stop writing. 
>> CORRECT
Clearly, writing will be important asset!
>> Clearly, writing will be an important asset! 
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