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Where is the strangest place you have ever slept?

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2022-08-03 878

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When I was a freshman in college student I went to the MT.
That is my fisrt event in university. I was looking foward that event. We were go to the resort. Our major freshman were twenty people and we were in one big room.
But I tought that was not enough to sleep together.
At night, we were gather in one room and we started drink alcohol. These days, it not like that drink alcohol oppressively.
That day, my seniors was little bit scared.
So some freshman drank many alcohol.
As time goes by, some people went to the room to sleep.
And last time, I went to the room almost last one with my friend.
But there was no where to sleep. All people already lay down in the room. There was no empty spot. We were so tired want sleep. So My friend and I went to the veranda.
It was winter. But we really want to sleep anywhere.
We laying down in veranda.. And that was the most cold and stranger place in my life.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Eun Chae!
Wow!  Your answer to this question is very long.  :o  Check the correct answers and learn the patterns in grammar more.  Have a great day! ^^


~T. Maine

When I was a freshman in college student I went to the MT.
>>When I was a freshman in college, I went to MT.
That is my fisrt event in university. 
>>That was my first event in the university. 
I was looking foward that event. 
>> I was looking forward to that event. 
We were go to the resort. 
>>We went to a resort. 
Our major freshman were twenty people and we were in one big room.
>> There were twenty freshmen in my major who were in one big room. 
But I tought that was not enough to sleep together.
>> But I thought that was not enough to sleep together. 
At night, we were gather in one room and we started drink alcohol. 
>> At night, we gathered in one room and we started drinking alcohol. 
These days, it not like that drink alcohol oppressively.
>> These days, I did not like to drink alcohol a lot. 
That day, my seniors was little bit scared.
>> On that day, my seniors were a little bit scared. 
So some freshman drank many alcohol.
>> So some freshmen drank a lot of alcohol. 
As time goes by, some people went to the room to sleep.
>>As time goes by, some people went to our room to sleep. 
And last time, I went to the room almost last one with my friend.
>>And I went to the room last with my friend. 
But there was no where to sleep. 
>> But there was no place to sleep. 
All people already lay down in the room. 
>> Correct. 
There was no empty spot. 
>>Correct. 
We were so tired want sleep. 
>> We were so tired that we wanted to sleep. 
So My friend and I went to the veranda.
>> So my friend and I went to the veranda. 
It was winter. 
>> Correct.
But we really want to sleep anywhere.
>>But I really want to sleep somewhere. 
We laying down in veranda.. 
>>We laid down on the veranda. 
And that was the most cold and stranger place in my life.
>> And that was the coldest and strangest place in my life. 

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