¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Do you think (or suspect) that people who work for the health service get better treatment than thos

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±Ç*¿ø
2022-08-02 513

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I think that some people who work for the health service get better treatment than those who do not.
I bet a doctor can gain a chance to get better treatment.
For example, my uncle graduated from a medical university and became an eye doctor.
He has many friends who are working in the health service industry, so he can get better treatment if he asks his friends for help.
His family can also utilize this chance.
But, I don't think all people who work in the health service industry can get this chance.
Especially nurses can't get better treatment.
I heard the news that one of the nurses who is working at Ahsan Hospital, the biggest hospital in Korea, had a stroke, but she couldn't receive treatment because she didn't make a reservation for treatment.
This hospital is criticized by the public because they couldn't even treat their workers.
I think if a doctor had a stroke, they would treat him or her regardless of the reservation.
We should eliminate this kind of discrimination.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Another outstanding work well done, Ji Won. You always amaze me :) To think that Korea has the best healthcare system in the world, in my opinion, they have to live up to that by taking care of their own workers. Korea's high-quality healthcare system is built on the backs of these healthcare workers and they deserve premium healthcare as well. Have a good night's rest and see you in our next class. ~Jane c", 


I think that some people who work for the health service get better treatment than those who do not. 
>> CORRECT =) 

I bet a doctor can gain a chance to get better treatment. 
>> CORRECT =) 

For example, my uncle graduated from a medical university and became an eye doctor. 
>> CORRECT =) 
OR >> For example, my uncle graduated from a medical university and became an optometrist. 

He has many friends who are working in the health service industry, so he can get better treatment if he asks his friends for help. 
>> CORRECT =) 

His family can also utilize this chance. 
>> CORRECT =) 

But, I don't think all people who work in the health service industry can get this chance. 
>> CORRECT =) 

Especially nurses can't get better treatment. 
>> CORRECT =) 

I heard the news that one of the nurses who is working at Ahsan Hospital, the biggest hospital in Korea, had a stroke, but she couldn't receive treatment because she didn't make a reservation for treatment. 
>> CORRECT =) 

This hospital is criticized by the public because they couldn't even treat their workers. 
>> CORRECT =) 

I think if a doctor had a stroke, they would treat him or her regardless of the reservation. 
>> CORRECT =) 

We should eliminate this kind of discrimination. 
>> CORRECT =) 

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
123637 16.Nov.2022 ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-17 2
123636 Thursday homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-11-17 1908
123635 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-17 45
123634 Homework ¼Û*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-11-17 3
123633 Which character from a book, movie or TV program would you like... ±¸*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 1541
123632 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 1
123631 Describe your favorite cafe ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 23
123630 Homework ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 1810
123629 Homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 1689
123628 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 0
123627 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 1851
123626 Do you believe human activities contribute to climate change? ±è*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 1280
123625 homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 2
123624 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 1638
123623 Is reading in a second language a good way to practice that... ¾ç*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 2065
123622 What social media do you use these days? Why do you prefer... ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 1794
123621 The most memorable ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 0
123620 What is a typical meal like from your country? ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 0
123619 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 1
123618 homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-11-16 0

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04