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How do you think a person can become a good listener?

작성자: 김*연
2022-07-30 393

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I think I am a bad litener, because I prefer to talk my story or I just want to do my work instead of just listening for someone's story. So this question made me sorry and think severly. I tend to not to hear my son's opinion first. I just talk what I want to talk to my son. So I was very sorry to my son. Now I have to practice to be a gook listener after writing this. I think a good listener have to have be an open-minded person. When we are ready to hear whatever, we can focus on the other person. And we have to have patience to someone. Because some people is too slow or too complicated to tell about what they want to talk. So just patience is the key to be a good listener. I will try to be a good listener for me and my people.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Arissa,

I'm glad that you were able to realize the value of being a good listener. I believe that you can do it. You are a person who likes to communicate with people so I know that you will be able to practice being a good listener too. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


I think I am a bad litener, because I prefer to talk my story or I just want to do my work instead of just listening for someone's story. So this question made me sorry and think severly. I tend to not to hear my son's opinion first. I just talk what I want to talk to my son. So I was very sorry to my son. Now I have to practice to be a gook listener after writing this. I think a good listener have to have be an open-minded person. When we are ready to hear whatever, we can focus on the other person. And we have to have patience to someone. Because some people is too slow or too complicated to tell about what they want to talk. So just patience is the key to be a good listener. I will try to be a good listener for me and my people.

>> I think I am a bad listener because I prefer to talk about my story or want to do my work instead of just listening to someone's story. So this question made me sorry and thought severely. I tend not to hear my son's opinion first. I talk about what I want to talk to my son. So I was very sorry to my son. Now I have to practice being a good listener after writing this. I think a good listener has to be an open-minded person. We can focus on the other person when we are ready to hear whatever. And we have to have patience with someone. Because some people are too slow or too complicated to tell what they want to talk about. So just, patience is the key to being a good listener. I will try to be a good listener for myself and my people.
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