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What do you do when you feel pressured?

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I made my nickname as a 'Speedgirl', because I enjoy the speed. So when I feel that I am pressured, I try to watch a car racing movie or drive by myself speedly. However I know that the later one is very dangerous. So I usually watch movie, Fast & Furious series. I feel my mind open wide and my stress fly away after watching it. Sometimes it is helpful to go another world even though it is a virtual reality.
There is another way to overcome the pressure. It is to visit to a nice cafe. When I drink a delicious tea or coffee and eat cookies or cakes, I feel comfortable and happy. These two ways will help to reduce pressure.

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Hello Arissa,

It's great to know that you have your own effective ways in helping reduce pressure. 
I think finding ways or things that make us feel comfortable and happy is really important. 
I hope that we will feel less pressured in life. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


I made my nickname as a 'Speedgirl', because I enjoy the speed. So when I feel that I am pressured, I try to watch a car racing movie or drive by myself speedly. However I know that the later one is very dangerous. So I usually watch movie, Fast & Furious series. I feel my mind open wide and my stress fly away after watching it. Sometimes it is helpful to go another world even though it is a virtual reality.
There is another way to overcome the pressure. It is to visit to a nice cafe. When I drink a delicious tea or coffee and eat cookies or cakes, I feel comfortable and happy. These two ways will help to reduce pressure.

>> I made my nickname, 'Speed Girl' because I enjoy speed. So when I feel that I am pressured, I try to watch a car racing movie or drive by myself speedily. However, I know that the latter one is very dangerous. So I usually watch the movie the Fast & Furious series. I feel my mind open wide and my stress fly away after watching it. Sometimes it is helpful to go to another world even though it is virtual reality.
There is another way to overcome the pressure. It is to visit a nice cafe. I feel comfortable and happy when I drink delicious tea or coffee and eat cookies or cakes. These two ways will help to reduce pressure.
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