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What country do you think is the most creative?

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I think that Denmark which took second place in the survey about the happiest country is the most creative. Because Denish territory is not wide. So, Denish people are easy to travel. Many places people can relax are near the city. They can go to the island which is as magnificent as a picture. They are able to see wonderful scenes and various things. It means that they are inspired from various things. Because of this, I think that Denmark is the most creative.

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Hi there, Kimberly!

I am impressed with your written output! Denmark is truly a beautiful country, and a lot of people admire their aesthetic. 
I would like to visit Denmark in the future and appreciate its creativity. 
You did a fantastic job! I love how informative and descriptive your homework.

See you later in class!
~ Teacher Gela

I think that Denmark which took second place in the survey about the happiest country is the most creative. 
>> I think, Denmark; which took second place in the survey about the happiest country being the most creative. 
Because Denish territory is not wide. 
>> Because the Danish territory is not wide. 
So, Denish people are easy to travel. 
>>  So, Danish people can travel easily. 
Many places people can relax are near the city. 
>> Many places people can relax at are near the city. 
They can go to the island which is as magnificent as a picture. 
>> CORRECT
They are able to see wonderful scenes and various things. 
>> CORRECT
It means that they are inspired from various things. 
>> CORRECT
Because of this, I think that Denmark is the most creative.
>> CORRECT
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