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Why did you choose your major? Do you have any regrets?

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my major is business. the reason why i chose this major is... i studied language and social than math and science when i was in highschool. you know korea high school is separted in language, math, art and athletics. so we have to choose one of them in highschool. so i just chose language and naturally when i went to colleage i chose business. umm sometimes i regret about my choice, because you know mechanic major is easier to get a job. but im not good at difficult math, so i dont have any choice right? so now im satisfied about my major

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my major is business. the reason why i chose this major is... 
i studied language and social than math and science when i was in highschool. 
>>My major is business and the reason why I chose this is because I studied language and social studies more than math and science when I was in high school.

you know korea high school is separted in language, math, art and athletics.
>> You know Korea's subjects are divided into language, math, art, and athletics.  

 so we have to choose one of them in highschool. 
>>So we have to choose one of them in high school. 

so i just chose language and naturally when i went to colleage i chose business. 
>>So I just chose language and naturally when I went to college I chose business.  

umm sometimes i regret about my choice, because you know mechanic major is easier to get a job. 
>>Sometimes, I regret my choice because you know the major related to mechanics gets the job easily. 

but im not good at difficult math, so i dont have any choice right? so now im satisfied about my major
>>But I'm not good at solving difficult math, so I don't have any choice.  So now I'm satisfied with my major. 

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