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What are the advantages and disadvantages of peer pressure?

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In my case, if someone says words hurting my pride, I try to do my best more than ever to show my passion and persistence. This process is pretty stressful because my trying started from not volunteering but from peer pressure. However, it made me mature. For example, I learned that people can learn and mature from the worst situation as well. In this sense, peer pressure can be one of the motivations that can make one's ability increase. On the other hand, if peer pressure is about not objected criticism but indiscriminate condemnation, it can be connected to peer bullying.

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Hi, Helena!
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In my case, if someone says words hurting my pride, I try to do my best more than ever to show my passion and persistence. 
>> CORRECT
This process is pretty stressful because my trying started from not volunteering but from peer pressure. 
>> This process is pretty stressful because I'm trying not voluntarily but because of peer pressure.
However, it made me mature. 
>> CORRECT
For example, I learned that people can learn and mature from the worst situation as well. 
>> CORRECT
In this sense, peer pressure can be one of the motivations that can make one's ability increase. 
>> In this sense, peer pressure can be one of the motivations that can improve one's ability.
On the other hand, if peer pressure is about not objected criticism but indiscriminate condemnation, it can be connected to peer bullying.
>> On the other hand, if peer pressure is not about objective criticism but just indiscriminate condemnation, it can be connected to peer bullying.
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