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ESSAY: Some people prefer to buy local products while others prefer international products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are no coffee trees, banana trees and coconut trees in Korea.
I have no choice when I buy those produnts although I prefer to buy local products.
Otherwise, I find many expensive international cars on the road although there are famous car companies in Korea.
I think they want to show with the internationl cars how they are rich.
In my case, mostely, I prefer to buy korean products specially in cosmetics for skin care.
Some people prefer to buy international cosmetics cause of the brand.( Sisely, Chanel something like that.)
But I am sure that Korean know korean better sepically in cosmetics.
Perfume is an exception to me.
Because global brand of perfumes are better quality than Korean's.
I think when I buy something, I don't care where it comes from but I consider how it is good quality compare with the cost.

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Good afternoon Ms. Eunice! Have you had your lunch? Anyway, I don't cook anymore because I no longer have visitors because they left last night. Their hometown is 14 hours away by bus from my city so I packed pizza and chicken for them to eat while traveling. :) By the way, I prefer Korean cosmetics too! They're so much expensive though when I purchase here in my country. Hahaha!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
There are no coffee trees, banana trees and coconut trees in Korea.
>>> CORRECT
I have no choice when I buy those products although I prefer to buy local products.
>>> CORRECT
Otherwise, I find many expensive international cars on the road although there are famous car companies in Korea.
>>> CORRECT
I think they want to show with the internationl cars how they are rich.
>>> I think they want to show how rich they are with their imported cars.
In my case, mostely, I prefer to buy korean products specially in cosmetics for skin care.
>>> In my case, I mostly prefer to buy Korean products specially cosmetics for skin care.
Some people prefer to buy international cosmetics cause of the brand. ( Sisely, Channel something like that.)
>>> CORRECT
But I am sure that Korean know korean better sepically in cosmetics.
>>> But I am sure that Koreans know Korean products better specially  cosmetics.
Perfume is an exception to me.
>>> CORRECT
Because global brand perfumes are better quality than Korean's.
>>> CORRECT
I think when I buy something, I don't care where it comes from but I consider how it is good quality compare with the cost.
>>> I think when I buy something, I don't care where it come from but I consider the quality compared with the price.
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