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What concerns do you have about food? What are your ¡®rules of thumb¡¯ when food shopping?

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The first thing I do when I go shopping is checking expire date and price. I am quite sensitive of spoiled food. I really hate my wife's habbits in which she put a lot of things in cold storage of refregerator. There are uncountable frozen food in there that might go bad. It is common to check the period of circulation and we misunderstand it as a expire date although we can eat it but I usually throw it away if it past the period of circulation because I want to prevent the portential health problem. Price of food is also major factor when I go shopping. There are numerous products from the different companies. Actually, I don't exactly know which is the famous products and safe ones. I usually choose the cheapest food and sometimes buy the things that I have heard from the advertisement. That is my rules of thumb. At the first, I check the period of circulation and then compare to the price.

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

The first thing I do when I go shopping is checking expire date and price. 
>> The first thing I do when I go shopping is to check the expiration date and price. 
I am quite sensitive of spoiled food. 
>> CORRECT!
I really hate my wife's habbits in which she put a lot of things in cold storage of refregerator. 
>> I really hate my wife's habits in which she put a lot of things in the cold storage of our refrigerator. 
OR >> I really hate my wife's habits of putting a lot of things in the cold storage of our fridge. 
There are uncountable frozen food in there that might go bad. 
>> CORRECT!
It is common to check the period of circulation and we misunderstand it as a expire date although we can eat it but I usually throw it away if it past the period of circulation because I want to prevent the portential health problem. 
>> It is common to check the period of circulation and we misunderstand it as an expiration date although we can eat it but I usually throw it away if it's past the period of circulation because I want to prevent the potential health problem. 
Price of food is also major factor when I go shopping. 
>> The price of food is also a major factor when I go shopping. 
There are numerous products from the different companies. 
>> CORRECT!
Actually, I don't exactly know which is the famous products and safe ones. 
>> CORRECT!
I usually choose the cheapest food and sometimes buy the things that I have heard from the advertisement. 
>> CORRECT!
That is my rules of thumb. 
>> Those are my rules of thumb. 
At the first, I check the period of circulation and then compare to the price.
>>  At first, I check the period of circulation and then compare the price.

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