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Would you recommend that a friend take a cruise? Why or why not?

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Yes, I would recommend that a friend take a cruise.
Because you can see the beautiful scenery by taking a cruise.
Especially in Korea, taking a cruise in Han River is really famous and popular for many visitors.
You can enjoy night view in the cruise.
And also, It is possible to overlook the whole Seoul city with amazing landscape.
While taking the cruise, people can also enjoy delicious food with alchols.
So that¡¯s why I highly recommend my friend to take a cruise.

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Hey there, Cindy!

 

That was an interesting answer. I also wanted to take a cruise someday!

 

-Kristine ^^

 

Yes, I would recommend that a friend take a cruise.

>> Yes, I would recommend taking a cruise to my friends.

Because you can see the beautiful scenery by taking a cruise.

>> Because when you take a cruise, you can see beautiful scenery.
Especially in Korea, taking a cruise in Han River is really famous and popular for many visitors.

>> Correct.
You can enjoy night view in the cruise.

>> You can enjoy the night view on a cruise.
And also, It is possible to overlook the whole Seoul city with amazing landscape.

>> Also, you can see amazing landscapes overlooking in Seoul city.
While taking the cruise, people can also enjoy delicious food with alchols.

>> People can also enjoy delicious foods and alcohol while taking the cruise.
So that¡¯s why I highly recommend my friend to take a cruise.

>> So that¡¯s why I highly recommend my friends to take a cruise. 

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