¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

School uniform does not stop bullying and may increase violent attacks. How?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*¿¬
2022-07-26 336

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I agree with this statement that wearing school uniforms does not stop bullying. Because I think bullying happens because of attackers' wrong personalities and values rather than wearing school uniforms itself. However, it is a little bit doubtful that wearing school uniforms can increase violent attacks. Even if wearing school uniforms is not a duty for students, violent issues can always happen. Attackers may try to find trivial issues in victims except for school uniforms. For example, attackers can make victims feel humiliated by comparing brand names of clothes.

If there is a statistical result showing that wearing school uniforms may increase violent attacks, it is because of the possibility of invisible violent attacks. School uniforms seem the same, and attackers can use this characteristic. For example, they can steal victims' neckties and pants uniforms however, it is difficult to be disclosed.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Helena!
Just like what we've discussed during the lesson, uniforms may or may not have an effect when it comes to bullying but not everything is negative when it comes to wearing school uniforms.
-T. Caitlyn
I agree with this statement that wearing school uniforms does not stop bullying. Because I think bullying happens because of attackers' wrong personalities and values rather than wearing school uniforms itself. 
>> I agree with this statement that wearing school uniforms does not stop bullying because I think bullying happens because of attackers' wrong personalities and values rather than wearing school uniforms itself. 
However, it is a little bit doubtful that wearing school uniforms can increase violent attacks. 
>> CORRECT
Even if wearing school uniforms is not a duty for students, violent issues can always happen. 
>> CORRECT
Attackers may try to find trivial issues in victims except for school uniforms. 
>> CORRECT
For example, attackers can make victims feel humiliated by comparing brand names of clothes.
>> CORRECT
If there is a statistical result showing that wearing school uniforms may increase violent attacks, it is because of the possibility of invisible violent attacks. 
>> CORRECT
School uniforms seem the same, and attackers can use this characteristic. 
>> CORRECT
For example, they can steal victims' neckties and pants uniforms however, it is difficult to be disclosed.
>> For example, stealing one's necktie or pants since it will be difficult to distinguish whose property it is.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
119875 Homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 133
119874 What situations do you suffer from headache? ½Å*ÈÄ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 1
119873 homework ¿ø*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 128
119872 what I like most about my hometown Áö*³ª ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 147
119871 homework ÀÌ*¾Ö ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 2
119870 What traffic rule is often violated? ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 144
119869 Who do you think is the best president of your country and why? ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 142
119868 Who do you think is the best president of your country and why? ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 0
119867 homework ÃÖ*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 168
119866 Wednesday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 120
119865 What is your dream house and where do you want it to be? ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 0
119864 home work ÃÖ*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 166
119863 Soeun\'s Homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 150
119862 When moving in ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 3
119861 What is the best way to learn a language? / What difficulties... ±è*¼Ò ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 104
119860 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 2
119859 homework ÀÌ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 136
119858 ¤¤ È«*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 128
119857 Homework for 06.14.2022 ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 1
119856 Why are tattoos a popular trend? ÁÖ*¼® ¿Ï·á 2022-06-15 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04