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Hi, there.
How was your day?
I was too busy to do my homework or something else.
There were many clients in my clinic all day, and I should have worked on focus.
Moreover, I had many paperworks and lots of meetings.
Time just flied as a bullet.
I've done all my jobs just before except this homework.
Tomorrow evening, I have an important meeting with my friend who is a lawyer.
I took on too much, I think.
But, now I can't turn back.
I just go ahead, as you told me.
Back to my homework, you asked me what I will do if I failed something despite of doing my best.
In that situation, first of all, I will try to find a reason why I failed.
Next, I should able to find out the better way.
If I failed repeatedly, I can change to the goal that is more easy, and then I can go up more higher step by step.
Many people say, "Failure is all right."
However Repetition of failure is too bad.
So, we should learn from a previous failure.
Oh my... It's almost midnight.
I should go to bed.
Catch you soon.

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Hello. Dr. Kim!

I had a long, long day as well yesterday. I was beat but very happy. It's too bad that you got caught up late in your clinic and had to sleep very late. However, I am so grateful that you did your homework and that is impressive! Your days are going to be tough and rough but then that is the way to have your franchise manifest soon. I wish you all the best in meeting your lawyer friend tonight.

Failure makes us human. Although all of us fail, there are those who fail more than us and vice versa. This is the reason why we are equipped with skills to overcome these dire situations. Even finding out the reason why we failed may not be of good use sometimes. The better skill after failing is the ability to move on  and the humility to try again. But then, I agree that if we keep failing, something is not meant for us. After all, rejection is a direction. In short, we need to change the goal and adjust the plan.

I wish you a productive and focused day at work. Thank you very much for sending your ideas to the homework question. You always try and do your best to express your thoughts in a vivid, simple yet meaningful, and organized composition. Outstanding!

See you in a few.

-T. Donna~

Hi, there.
>> Correct!

How was your day?
>> Correct!

I was too busy to do my homework or something else.
>> Correct!

There were many clients in my clinic all day, and I should have worked on focus.
>> Correct!

Moreover, I had many paperworks and lots of meetings.
>> Correct!

Time just flied as a bullet.
>> Time just flew as a bullet.

I've done all my jobs just before except this homework.
>> Corerct!

Tomorrow evening, I have an important meeting with my friend who is a lawyer.
>> Correct!
Or: Tomorrow night...

I took on too much, I think.
>> Correct!

But, now I can't turn back.
>> Correct!

I just go ahead, as you told me.
>> Correct!

Back to my homework, you asked me what I will do if I failed something despite of doing my best.
>> Back to my homework, you asked me what I will do if I failed on something despite of doing my best.

In that situation, first of all, I will try to find a reason why I failed.
>> Correct!

Next, I should able to find out the better way.
>> Correct!
Or: Next, I should able to find out a better way.

If I failed repeatedly, I can change to the goal that is more easy, and then I can go up more higher step by step.
>> If I failed repeatedly, I can change the goal that is easier, and then I can go up higher step by step.

Many people say, "Failure is all right."
>> Correct!

However Repetition of failure is too bad.
>> Correct!
Or: However, repetition of failure is too bad.

So, we should learn from a previous failure.
>> Correct!

Oh my... It's almost midnight.
>> Correct!

I should go to bed.
>> Correct!

Catch you soon.
>> Correct!
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