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What kind of job do you want to get in the future? What kind of tasks will you have to do?

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umm well...In the past. i wanna be a labor lawyer..umm maybe 2years ago? but you know unfortunately i failed the test
so i changed my life plan, its like not only use the knowledge of labor law, but also use my major
you know my major is business? so i make a goal to go to the HR department
i guess it must be very fun. because human resource department treat everything about the workers.
for instance, find some elite workers and bring them into the film, and give a money to them, and also we can fire some workers who have low result. maybe it is tough task sometimes, but i have to overcome right? so i wanna be a HR manager

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Hello Robin!
You have a big dream for yourself.  I hope you do your best to get that job and become the person you want to be.  ^^



~T. Maine

umm well...In the past. i wanna be a labor lawyer..umm maybe 2years ago? 
>>Well, in the past about two years ago, I wanted to be a labor lawyer. 

but you know unfortunately i failed the test
so i changed my life plan, 
>>But you know, unfortunately, I failed the test so I changed my life's plan.  

its like not only use the knowledge of labor law, but also use my major
you know my major is business? so i make a goal to go to the HR department
>> It's not the use of my knowledge in labor law, but also using my major. 

i guess it must be very fun. because human resource department treat everything about the workers.
>>I guess it will be full of fun because the human resource department will handle everything about employees. 

for instance, find some elite workers and bring them into the film, and give a money to them, and also we can fire some workers who have low result.
>> For instance,  we find some elite workers and bring them into the picture then we give them some money.  In addition, we can also remove some employees who have low evaluation results. 

 maybe it is tough task sometimes, but i have to overcome right? so i wanna be a HR manager
>> Maybe it is a tough task sometimes, but I have to overcome it.  So I want to be an HR manager someday.  

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