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HOMEWORK:
What is your favorite daily fashion? Answer in a few sentences.

I prefer to wear casually when I work. So, I like to wear jeans. It is useful in both formal and informal styles. In this hot weather, I also like to wear T-shirts.

Thank you Donna. I'm so happy to move on to the next level 2 in a few days!

Take care.

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Hi there, Hae Ju!

Casual clothes are comfortable and easy to wash and wear. Working uniforms can be outdated and sometimes be out of style.

Anyway, you did excellent here on your homework! The grammar is perfect and the sentences were written very clearly. Thank you so much for doing your best in sharing your casual clothing preference daily. I am happier for your achievements, especially your book accomplishement onwards Free Talking Book 2.

Stay safe an healthy.

See you tomorrow!

-T. Donna~

I prefer to wear casually when I work. 
>> Correct!
Or: I prefer to wear casual clothers when I work.

So, I like to wear jeans.
>> Correct!

 It is useful in both formal and informal styles. 
>> Correct!

In this hot weather, I also like to wear T-shirts.
>> Correct!
Or: t-shirts

Thank you Donna. I'm so happy to move on to the next level 2 in a few days!
>> Correct!

Take care.
>> Correct!
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