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Does your country have special food for any of the seasons? What are they?

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Each country has each special food for the seasons. They are different from each other.

First in my country, the special food for spring is strawberry. Strawberries are sweat and healthy. And it is my favorite fruit. There are many friends that like strawberries around us.

Second, the special food for summer is watermelon. Watermelon is also sweat. My family likes watermelon very much. Also, watermelon could be the first image when you think about summer.

Third, the special foods for fall are many kinds of fruits. Because fall is the season of harvest. We can eat many kinds of sweat fruits in fall. In my case, my favorite fruit in fall is apple. I like apple very much because it is so yummy.

Lastly, the special food for winter is baked sweat potato. When it is cold, we want to eat warm baked sweat potato inside the house. Although it is cold outside, I can feel warm because I have my family to talk with over the warm baked sweet potatoes.

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Hello, Kim Ye Kyeom! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

Each country has each special food for the seasons.
>>> Each country has special food for the seasons. 

They are different from each other.
>>> CORRECT!

First in my country, the special food for spring is strawberry. 
>>> First, in my country, the special food for spring is strawberries. 

Strawberries are sweat and healthy. 
>>> Strawberries are sweet and healthy.

And it is my favorite fruit. 
>>> CORRECT!

There are many friends that like strawberries around us.
>>> CORRECT!

Second, the special food for summer is watermelon. 
>>> CORRECT!

Watermelon is also sweat. 
>>> CORRECT!

My family likes watermelon very much. 
>>> CORRECT!

Also, watermelon could be the first image when you think about summer.
>>> CORRECT!

Third, the special foods for fall are many kinds of fruits. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because fall is the season of harvest. 
>>> CORRECT!

We can eat many kinds of sweat fruits in fall. 
>>> We can eat many kinds of sweat fruits in the fall.

In my case, my favorite fruit in fall is apple. 
>>> In my case, my favorite fruit in fall is the apple.

I like apple very much because it is so yummy.
>>> CORRECT!

Lastly, the special food for winter is baked sweat potato. 
>>> Lastly, the special food for winter is baked sweet potato.

When it is cold, we want to eat warm baked sweat potato inside the house. 
>>> When it is cold, we want to eat warm baked sweet potatoes inside the house.

Although it is cold outside, I can feel warm because I have my family to talk with over the warm baked sweet potatoes.
>>> CORRECT!
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