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What do you do in a typical workday in your workplace?

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first of all.. i don't work on every weekday. i work only on tuesday wednesday and saturday. and i am a math teacher. and i work in the math academy for elementary students. so when i go workplace, first i check my schedule for class and prepare some math question. and check my students homework. you know i mean check whether it is correct or not. while i do that,..my student come to the academy and you know its time to teach them. it is most tough moment in my workplace. umm after class i clean up my classroom and go back to home! and it is most happy time while i working. that's it!

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Hello Robin!
You still need to check the correct sentences suggested so you will be able to use them when you are already speaking especially when you have the exam as well.  Try to memorize them too. :)


~T. Maine


first of all.. i don't work on every weekday. 
>>First of all, I don't work on weekdays. 

i work only on tuesday wednesday and saturday.
>> I work only on Tuesdays, Wednesdays, and Saturdays. 

and i am a math teacher. and i work in the math academy for elementary students. 
>> I am a math teacher and I work in a math academy for elementary students. 

so when i go workplace, first i check my schedule for class and prepare some math question. 
>>So when I go to my workplace, first I check my schedule for class and prepare some math questions. 

and check my students homework. 
>>Then I check my students' homework.  

you know i mean check whether it is correct or not. 
>>You know, I mean I check whether it is correct or not. 

while i do that,..my student come to the academy and you know its time to teach them. 
>>While I do that, my students come to the academy and then it's time to teach them. 

it is most tough moment in my workplace. 
>> It is the toughest moment in my workplace.

umm after class i clean up my classroom and go back to home! and it is most happy time while i working. that's it!
>>After class, I clean up my classroom and go back home.  It is the happiest time while working.  That's it! 



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