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Why do you think students get bad grades?

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I think that the reason why some students get bad grades is related to interest about study. Some students are interested in studying but others are not. Interest is valuable part. Without interest, students may be sick and tired more easily. Of course, there are many other reasons like circumstance or level. However, I think that grades are not everything. So, I hope that instead of everyone including me being sad, we think about what I do well deeply.

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Good evening, Kimberly!


Good job on doing your homework. It is true that bad grades are not everything.

We should learn that our bad academic results do not define who we are.

I appreciate your advice which is to reflect on our great skills instead of being upset of our setbacks.

Well done!


~ Teacher Gela


I think that the reason why some students get bad grades is related to interest about study.

>> CORRECT

OR>> I think that the reason why some students get bad grades is related to their interest in studying.

Some students are interested in studying but others are not.

>> CORRECT

Interest is valuable part.

>> Interest is a valuable part.

Without interest, students may be sick and tired more easily.

>> Without interest in studying, students may get more sick and tired easily.

Of course, there are many other reasons like circumstance or level.

>> Of course, there are many other reasons like a circumstance or the difficulty level.

However, I think that grades are not everything.

>> CORRECT

So, I hope that instead of everyone including me being sad, we think about what I do well deeply.

>> So, I hope that instead of everyone, including me, being sad, we should think about what we do well deeply. 

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