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How Has Your Experience Prepared You for This Role or position?

작성자: 유*영
2022-07-22 447

회원님의 영작문

First, I have an relevant experiences. This position is promoting the sales of the products. So, understanding of the products is important. They should emphasize the positive things of the products to the clients compared to the other products. To understand the products, experiences about the R&D of new drug development is helpful because they handle the Biopharmaceutical raw materials. At that point, I’ve been in biopharma company for 4 years, specializing in R&D. The interviewers also compliment my experiences.
Second, I also frequently have done the presentation in front of co-workers since I was a graduate student. Actually, I really enjoy sharing the knowledge to people. This position requires the good presentation skills.
Third, I majored in Molecular Biology as Bachlar’s degree and Cell Biology is my master’s degree. During 6 years, I studied the Biology.
So, I think that I can do the job well.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Young,
First, I have relevant experience. This position is promoting the sales of the products. So, understanding the products is important. They should emphasize the positive things of the products to the clients compared to the other products. Understanding the products, and experiences of the R&D of new drug development is helpful because they handle the Biopharmaceutical raw materials.  At that point, I’ve been in a biopharma company for 4 years, specializing in R&D. The interviewers also compliment my experiences.  Second, I also frequently have done presentations in front of my co-workers since I was a graduate student. Actually, I really enjoy sharing my knowledge with people. This position requires good presentation skills. Third, I majored in Molecular Biology as Bachelor's degree and Cell Biology is my master’s degree. I studied Biology for 6 years. So, I think that I can do the job well. 

Good Luck and do you best..")


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First, I have an relevant experiences. 
>> First, I have relevant experience. 
This position is promoting the sales of the products. So, understanding of the products is important. They should emphasize the positive things of the products to the clients compared to the other products. 
>> This position is promoting the sales of the products. So, understanding the products is important. They should emphasize the positive things of the products to the clients compared to the other products. 
To understand the products, experiences about the R&D of new drug development is helpful because they handle the Biopharmaceutical raw materials. 
>> Understanding the products, and experiences of the R&D of new drug development is helpful because they handle the Biopharmaceutical raw materials. 
At that point, I’ve been in biopharma company for 4 years, specializing in R&D. The interviewers also compliment my experiences.
>> At that point, I’ve been in a biopharma company for 4 years, specializing in R&D. The interviewers also compliment my experiences.
Second, I also frequently have done the presentation in front of co-workers since I was a graduate student. 
>> Second, I also frequently have done presentations in front of my co-workers since I was a graduate student. 
Actually, I really enjoy sharing the knowledge to people. This position requires the good presentation skills.
>>Actually, I really enjoy sharing my knowledge with people. This position requires good presentation skills.
Third, I majored in Molecular Biology as Bachlar’s degree and Cell Biology is my master’s degree. During 6 years, I studied the Biology.
>> Third, I majored in Molecular Biology as Bachelor's degree and Cell Biology is my master’s degree. I studied Biology for 6 years. 
So, I think that I can do the job well.
>> So, I think that I can do the job well.
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First, I have an relevant experiences. This position is promoting the sales of the products. So, understanding of the products is important. They should emphasize the positive things of the products to the clients compared to the other products. To understand the products, experiences about the R&D of new drug development is helpful because they handle the Biopharmaceutical raw materials. At that point, I’ve been in biopharma company for 4 years, specializing in R&D. The interviewers also compliment my experiences.
Second, I also frequently have done the presentation in front of co-workers since I was a graduate student. Actually, I really enjoy sharing the knowledge to people. This position requires the good presentation skills.
Third, I majored in Molecular Biology as Bachlar’s degree and Cell Biology is my master’s degree. During 6 years, I studied the Biology.
So, I think that I can do the job well.
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