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hello caitlyn. i¡¯m late again. sorry.

it depends on the person but i think that visiting another country can change people¡¯s think. most people want to growing up a lot of part about themselves. to that end, most easier way is travelling overseas. it can learn a variety of culture, it can develop our horizen. it must be there are no person who disagree this sentence. of course, there are exist that another way of develop themselves.

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Hi, Yeong Ho!
As the saying goes, "When in Rome, Do as the Romans Do". These experiences can help us change our perspective regarding the culture and traditions of other countries and can influence our behavior in the future.
-T. Caitlyn
it depends on the person but i think that visiting another country can change people¡¯s think. 
>> It depends on the person but I think visiting another country can change the way people think.
most people want to growing up a lot of part about themselves. to that end, most easier way is travelling overseas. 
>> Most people want to develop a lot of aspects about themselves and the easiest way to do that is to travel overseas.
it can learn a variety of culture, it can develop our horizen. 
>> They can learn a variety of culture and broaden their horizon.
it must be there are no person who disagree this sentence. 
>> I think no one would disagree with this.
of course, there are exist that another way of develop themselves.
>>Of course, there are also other ways to develop themselves.
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