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Do they deserve the same level of treatment that we offer to other humans?

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What are the differences between equal and equivalent? Equal means that all things are the same however, equivalent means that some parts are the same.

Animals deserve respect. Especially they should not become victims of animal abuse. At the same time, animals can not become the same existence as humans. For example, humans should protect animals however, humans do need to treat them respectfully to animals like bowing and greeting them.

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Hi, Helena!
I agree that we should treat animals with respect but not to the point of worshiping them. We must still remember that a persons life is more valuable.
-T. Caitlyn
What are the differences between equal and equivalent? 
>> CORRECT
Equal means that all things are the same however, equivalent means that some parts are the same.
>> CORRECT
Animals deserve respect. Especially they should not become victims of animal abuse.
>> Animals deserve respect and they should not become victims of animal abuse.
 At the same time, animals can not become the same existence as humans. 
>> However, animals can not still be equal to humans.
For example, humans should protect animals however, humans do need to treat them respectfully to animals like bowing and greeting them.
>> For example, humans should protect animals however, humans do need to worship like bowing and greeting them.
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