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travelling can changed our life. it also can wide our sight. we learn history, and geography in school. however, it¡¯s not familiar because we didn¡¯t look it. there are exist more different point that between direct experience and indirect experience. although we spend time and money while travelling, we¡¯ll get a more experience that can¡¯t exchanged for money.

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Hi Yeong Ho!
Thank you for still doing your homework even though you got involved in a traffic accident. I hope everything is better. 
-T. Caitlyn
travelling can changed our life. 
>> traveling can change our lives.
it also can wide our sight. 
>> It can broaden our horizon.
we learn history, and geography in school. however, it¡¯s not familiar because we didn¡¯t look it.
>> We can learn history and geography at school however, it's not familiar to us because we didn't experience it personally.
 there are exist more different point that between direct experience and indirect experience. 
>> There is really a big difference between direct and indirect experience.
although we spend time and money while travelling, we¡¯ll get a more experience that can¡¯t exchanged for money.
>> Although we spend time and money while traveling, the experience we get from it can't be compared to that amount of money.
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