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I was interested in fashion a lot before, but I don't care what I were every day since I got married. I used to go shopping a lot, when I was a high school student. Sadly, my hometown was in countryside, so it was difficult to find nice shop. I used to go Seoul to get clothes in a brand shops althouth I didn't have enough money. I don't remember my monthly allowance, mayby it was a small amount of money, but I used to save it for a long time and went shopping with my friends. Even though, It takes an hour to get there by a train, I really love to go shopping. Howeve, I like uniform because I don't have to think what I wear every morning. I think fashion models are the most stylish people in the world. They have amazing body shape, so it looks gorgeous whatever they wear. I heard that fashionable people don't like buying brand clothes and expensive ones, they prefer to purchase things that match with their items such as shoes, accessaries, and so on.

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I was interested in fashion a lot before, but I don't care what I were every day since I got married. 
>> I was interested in fashion a lot before, but I don't care what I wear every day since I got married. 
I used to go shopping a lot, when I was a high school student. 
>> CORRECT!
Sadly, my hometown was in countryside, so it was difficult to find nice shop. 
>> Sadly, my hometown was in the countryside, so it was difficult to find a nice shop. 
OR >> Sadly, my hometown was in the countryside, so it was difficult to find nice shops. 
I used to go Seoul to get clothes in a brand shops althouth I didn't have enough money. 
>> I used to go to Seoul to get clothes in a brand shops althouth I didn't have enough money. 
I don't remember my monthly allowance, mayby it was a small amount of money, but I used to save it for a long time and went shopping with my friends. 
>> I don't remember how much my monthly allowance was, maybe it was a small amount of money, but I used to save it for a long time and went shopping with my friends. 
Even though, It takes an hour to get there by a train, I really love to go shopping. 
>> CORRECT!
Howeve, I like uniform because I don't have to think what I wear every morning. 
>> However, I like wearing uniforms because I don't have to think about what I should wear every morning. 
I think fashion models are the most stylish people in the world. 
>> CORRECT!
They have amazing body shape, so it looks gorgeous whatever they wear. 
>> CORRECT!
I heard that fashionable people don't like buying brand clothes and expensive ones, they prefer to purchase things that match with their items such as shoes, accessaries, and so on.
>> CORRECT!

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